Friday 26 March 2010

EXTRACT THREE & CHAPTER THREE OF STORY.Please note in order for this to make sense please read extracts 1&2 first-thankyou.

Charlie's boyfriend Sam,slammed his fist into the wall over and over,untill his hand was so slippery with blood,he could'nt continue.Charlie had been gone for days now,and no one,not even the police would take him seriously."she's a grown woman.Although as she's been gone longer than 24.We are looking sir!"they said.Her parents said;"she's been on benders for days at a time before now."
But he knew!He knew what the scars of her ex Daniel,had left on Charlie.Both physically and mentally.This whole thing was extremley wrong.She was still petrified that he would make good his threats.And find her.She barley ever left the house alone!Sam and Charlie had a two hour rule.If they were apart and one hadn't contacted the other after 2 hours,and the phone in question was off,somthing was very wrong.Sobbing in frustration,knowing what the girl he adored,was going through right now!He fell to his knees retching violently.He had her!He knew it and no one would listen.There was only him to help her now.(if she was still alive.)Although he knew if her spirit was not on this earth anymore,he would feel her complete absence,but her prescence was all around him.Quickly rising to his feet,he grabbed his keys off the kitchen table,and ran out of the front door.Slamming it violently behind him.

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