Thursday 18 March 2010

extract 1 from story i'm writing

: "Extract from story am writing. 'i told you bitch wherever you go,whatever you do.i will find you.did you really think you could run from me?' he spat.'daniel i...'she stuttered.'daniel nothing!its taken you fucking days to realize who i am,you fucing whore.have you been with that many men you couldnt remember me without seeing my face?'he released his grip on her throat pushing on her windpipe as he did so.gasping for breath,she began to splutter 'no.no.its just,i was confused,couldnt think straight!' 'enough excuses!'he bellowed,making her flinch,automatically waiting for the blow ,before he began the rant that she knew would follow,she had to act,had to get his guard down and revert back to the victim he had kept her as for so long.'i never stopped thinking about you.'she said softly.his dark eyes flashed with hatred,his breathing heavy almost gutteral.'get up!'he hissed.fear spread through her like ice through her veins.'get up'he repeated.she tried to rise from the floor,her legs desperate to give way.her knees buckling as she struggled to her feet.shaking she stood before him,naked and ashamed under his unflinching gaze.without a word he struck a blow to her tender stomach,the air hissing from her as she crumpled to her knees."

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