Hi again ,
So I've just finished chapter 6 on Gateway to hell. So now I have a little free time to post the topics I promised a few days ago. I will post chapter 2 of Gateway to hell in a few moments. If you can't wait for the subsequent chapters after that...you can read all the way to chapter 6 on Wattpad
Following chapter 2, I will be posting some creative writing tips. Basically it's my writing process, so hopefully you will find some of my methods helpful?
Ok that's it for now. If you are a horror fan then this story will be right up your street!
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Upcoming posts
Coming up this week
So I've been absent from blogging for quite some time. Now I'm back I've posted the first chapter from my latest horror story "Gateway to hell."
If you don't want to wait for the subsequent chapters to be posted ( Will be posted through the following weeks) then you can catch me at ; www.wattpad.com/eliza_crush where you can also read the following chapters, and my other works for free!
Also coming up ;
- Guest posts from some fabulous writer's and bloggers also from Wattpad. Posting writing tips, extracts of their work, and humorous bits and pieces from their lives,
- Short stories, and more chapters from my Wattpad publications in various genres.
- Writing and blogging tips
- My personal favourite...the calamities I manage to find myself in from day to day. I hope you laugh at me as hard as I laugh at myself.
- Using setting in you're writing eg. show don't tell
- How to earn money from you're blog by marketing you're online presence. This is a good one if you want to earn from your writing solely from using your blog, or if you want to self publish with the likes of kindle.
If you are particularly keen to see one of those posts before the others, give me a shout via my contact details on the 'about me' page, and I will put it to the top of the list.
That's it for now. I hope you enjoy the first chapter of Gateway to hell ( please note it is horror and some scenes are graphic, violent, and have bad language.)
Feel free to comment, even if it's because you want to tell me my writing sucks....although, don't ok...just No! ;-)
Eliza Crush ~~~ (pen name)
Gateway to hell ( Chapter 1)
Chapter 1.
I am posting the first few chapters of my new horror story " Gateway to Hell." I hope you enjoy! At first it may seem the story is a little cliché, however if you stick with me, you will soon see that I am taking the story in a completely different direction!
If you enjoy my work, you can catch me on www.wattpad.com/eliza_crush.
I will post subsequent chapters as I write them.
To her surprise , the pointer shot to 'yes' once she had commandingly and theatrically announced
"are there any spirits here with us?"
Both girls eyed Kendall suspiciously.
"Ha! See what did I tell you? We may have a ghost tell us this weeks lottery numbers yet!"
Kendall snickered. She cleared her throat and began again.
"Is there someone here in the room with us now?"
The pointer again slid over to yes. Gabby put her head on the table, squinted one eye shut and peered at the pointer desperately trying to see if she could figure out who was pushing it as it slowly began to circle around impatiently waiting for a new question.
"Kendall, I know it's you pushing it, look at Neve she's bricking it. It can't be her!"
Gabby whined at her friend. Kendall glanced at Neve completely perplexed herself by the now looping motions of the Ouija boards pointer. Neve was shifting uncomfortably in her seat, her mouth a grimace of unhappiness at the evenings developments . Kendall shrugged it off, she didn't know if it was their collective energy or what, making it move. Who cares when it was just getting interesting? And Neve was always this serious, this was nothing new. She thought she would ramp up the tension a little more :
" If you're here with us and you are moving this pointer make yourself known to us."
The whirling pointer began to speed up again, faster, and faster round the board. Neve made a squeaking noise as she tried to protest, while Gabby glared at Kendall with narrowed eyes.
" Kendall if its not you moving this thing then I swear to god , I am outta here."
Gabby hissed at her. The pointer began spelling something out.
B...I...T..C...
That was enough for Gabby and Neve! They whipped their hands from the pointer so fast, it might as well of bitten them. Kendall sucked in a breath, very unsure of herself all of a sudden.
Immediately the atmosphere she had set up to create a Show for her friends seemed a little more sinister. The expensive lighting was dimmed, her moms expensive church candles situated around them casting a warm glow on the circle, and the vast expanse of living room shrouded in Eerie shadows. She studied the expressions on her friends faces, as they glanced nervously around the room as if a long dead grandparent were about to materialize in a dark corner somewhere.
Unease crept up Kendall's spine. The pointer was still again. If she quit now, she'd would look weak, even if her friends were terrified already. Weakness was not something she dealt well with.
" It's just started working, it was trying to say something? We can't quit now, let's ask it some questions?"
Kendall stated, her hand back on the pointer. Her very dubious friends tentatively following suit.
" Can you tell us you're name?"
She asked, as the pointer once again began to whirl around the board.
Neve, the quieter of the trio studied her friends face to see if she really believed there was something here with them. She caught a slight and brief furrow in her perfectly manicured brows as the pointer began to jerkily spell out a few letters. Before either girl could register what they were experiencing a splintering 'crack' broke the silence, glass exploding in a spray of shrapnel as if a bomb had exploded from within the fallen object! Neve flew at the light switch , and Gabby shrieked as if the finger of death had fallen upon her.
"Hey, hey, it's ok. It was just moms chandelier."
Kendell grabbed at one of her spooked friends, and tried to sit her back down.
"Oh god look at it! She is going to KILL me."
Kendall's calm slipped away at the sight of the smashed crystal strewn across the table.
"What the hell did that to it though? Why did it fall like that?"
Neve gestured wildly at the decimated object.
Before they could contemplate any more, the front door slammed and voices filled the hallway. Kendell's older sister Morgan popped her head around the corner.
"Hey Kendall, I found these two degenerates skulking around outside. I guess they are here for you? Some of us have studying to do, so try not to raise the decibel level ok?"
Not noticing the devastation of the broken lamp, she swept back her hair and continued on upstairs trailed by her boyfriend heavily laden with all Morgan's text books. Kendell's boyfriend Alex, and his best friend Wayne shuffled into the room sheepishly.
"What are you guys doing here?"
Kendell drawled, her eyes fixed on the mess across the dining table.
"We got kinda bored and thought we'd see what you girls are doing?"
Alex hooked an arm around her waist and pulled her in for a quick kiss.
"Woah..what ARE you doing exactly? This a Ouija board?"
Wayne's eyes widened in surprise as he swept the glass of the surface of the thing, craning his neck to get a better look. Gabby and Neve glanced at each other, eyebrows raised worried at what was sure to follow.
" What happened in here?"
Alex and Wayne spoke simultaneously.
Kendell ran her perfectly manicured fingernails through her thick, perfectly highlighted mane of blonde hair.
"It was nothing. We were messing around with this thing and mom's chandelier broke. Bad timing that's all."
Convincing as she sounded, she wrapped her arms round herself and suppressed a shudder.
" We are so doing this!"
Wayne snatched up the board, and headed to the coffee table to set it up. Neve shot forward, getting out of his way, trepidation etched on her plain features.
" No way am I touching that thing again. I'll clean up the mess before you're mom gets home."
She whispered to Kendall as she bustled past her to hunt out the dust pan and brush.
Kendall scanned her friends faces. Both Alex and Gabby were alight with eager anticipation awaiting the nod of approval from their unspoken ring leader.
"I guess since Neve is cleaning up."
She intoned, bustling her friends toward the seating area where Wayne was focused on positioning the pointer, the tip of his tongue poking through his upper lip in a expression of fierce concentration. After all, she wasn't one to forgo the opportunity to be the focus of their groups attentions. Leading a séance, with her friends hanging on her every word was something she just couldn't pass up. Gabby positioned herself next to Wayne, a smug grin plastered across her face. Kendell winked at her knowingly. No way would she have been up for another round of this had he not shown up. It was the perfect opportunity to get as close to him as she desired. Kendell slipped into the opposite two seater, Alex slid his arm around her waist protectively. She was glad of the support, a little voice at the back of her mind screamed at her to back out, but never in her life had she walked away from an audience and she wasn't about to now.
Think of the attention she could get from Alex, she thought to herself.
"Ok then, fingers on the pointer everyone."
Kendall cleared her throat dramatically ; " Are there any spirits in the room with us today?"
Wayne guffawed loudly, causing Gabby to giggle girlishly beside him.
" Shut up Wayne. You have to take this seriously for it to work."
Kendall sniffed haughtily. Alex kicked his disruptive friend under the table, and he held his palms out in submission. She gave Wayne and Gabby one last chiding glance and continued.
" If there are any spirits in the room with us, make yourselves known and move the pointer?"
Again the pointer shot across the board to 'yes'. The group gasped collectively.
"Not again." Gabby squealed, clutching Wayne's arm as if the pointer had burnt her. Kendall tutted.
"Hands back on quick! Do you have a message for us?"
She questioned into the air.
The pointer began to shoot across the board, uncontrollably. Kendall's breath caught in her throat, and she couldn't swallow, her throat was on fire. She was vaguely aware of Neve behind them making soft whimpering sounds. Alex pulled her hand off the pointer, eager to put a stop to this.
The stereo burst into life with a hiss of static, and before they could register what it was a booming voice spat:
"CUNT!"
Before she could even comprehend what was going on, she was aware of the skin on her arm ripping with a burning agony.
The stereo clunked into silence, and Kendall filled it with a gut wrenching scream.
Monday, 28 March 2011
Irrational female weirdness!
I don't know what's wrong with me sometimes? Well, I do...I'm female!
My husband and i were supposed to go on holiday for two weeks in portuagal. My regular readers will know i am completely agoraphobic. So when the time came near to go, i freaked out and decided i was going nowhere. The thought of not being able to get home for two whole weeks terrifies me! Fortunately, there were others joining us on our hols, and i gladly announced to my other half;
" no darling OF COURSE i don't mind you going without me...i'll be fine on my own!"
NEWS FLASH: I am not fine, not fine at all! I'm miserable, and scared, and pregnant!
Seriously...what the heck is going on with me? Eight years ago i lived on the streets for a couple of months, now i am falling apart and becoming a gibbering wreck in the comfort of my marital home. Marriage has turned me into a big baby!
Anyway, the point is this: I was glad to have him go without me, in fact i was relieved to be off the hook about it, and now? Now i'm just mad he damn well left me in the first place! How dare he go off enjoying himself, leaving me alone and miserable. HE JUST LEFT! HOW COULD HE LEAVE ME LIKE THAT?? See....angry! Completely irrational
*Sigh 11 days to go.
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My husband and i were supposed to go on holiday for two weeks in portuagal. My regular readers will know i am completely agoraphobic. So when the time came near to go, i freaked out and decided i was going nowhere. The thought of not being able to get home for two whole weeks terrifies me! Fortunately, there were others joining us on our hols, and i gladly announced to my other half;
" no darling OF COURSE i don't mind you going without me...i'll be fine on my own!"
NEWS FLASH: I am not fine, not fine at all! I'm miserable, and scared, and pregnant!
Seriously...what the heck is going on with me? Eight years ago i lived on the streets for a couple of months, now i am falling apart and becoming a gibbering wreck in the comfort of my marital home. Marriage has turned me into a big baby!
Anyway, the point is this: I was glad to have him go without me, in fact i was relieved to be off the hook about it, and now? Now i'm just mad he damn well left me in the first place! How dare he go off enjoying himself, leaving me alone and miserable. HE JUST LEFT! HOW COULD HE LEAVE ME LIKE THAT?? See....angry! Completely irrational
*Sigh 11 days to go.
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Thursday, 10 March 2011
How to use setting in your writing?
Setting is a major consideration and powerful tool in fiction writing. However, it is not just fiction writing that a good setting can be useful, but also can be used to bring a blog to life. Travel bloggers can use setting to entice their readers into really feeling the culture of a place, the architecture, and landscape. Used appropriately a setting can really make any type of blog post "pop", making your writing stand out from the millions of other blogs out there.
Setting means a certain place at a certain time, a stage. When and where does your story take place? Show us that place? For example...Waterloo railway station, on a crisp winter morning at 7.00am. Give details of the surroundings. The commuters arriving for work, smartly dressed men in suits with shiny black briefcases. Their early morning sighs, creating puffs of frosty breath that dissipates into the crisp winter air. The morning stillness is broken by the boom of a nasal voice announcing the approaching train. You see, we are ready to visualise the action now that we have a stage.
Although saying that, be careful of too much detail as it can become really boring and long winded, and readers often skip passages to get to the action. When descriptions of a place drag, the problem is usually not with the setting, but in presenting it too slowly. Make your descriptions dynamic and quick. Imagine you are watching a film. You wouldn't see half an hour of scenery before meeting the actors. So when you show your setting, give only a few details that will evoke a place. If the details are vivid, the reader will create a picture in their imagination.
When you write an article you ask " who, what, when, where, how and why?" when creating a story, ask "where, and when?" That is your setting!
If you are interested in a more detailed article about settings, just email me at meami_5@live.com
Setting means a certain place at a certain time, a stage. When and where does your story take place? Show us that place? For example...Waterloo railway station, on a crisp winter morning at 7.00am. Give details of the surroundings. The commuters arriving for work, smartly dressed men in suits with shiny black briefcases. Their early morning sighs, creating puffs of frosty breath that dissipates into the crisp winter air. The morning stillness is broken by the boom of a nasal voice announcing the approaching train. You see, we are ready to visualise the action now that we have a stage.
Although saying that, be careful of too much detail as it can become really boring and long winded, and readers often skip passages to get to the action. When descriptions of a place drag, the problem is usually not with the setting, but in presenting it too slowly. Make your descriptions dynamic and quick. Imagine you are watching a film. You wouldn't see half an hour of scenery before meeting the actors. So when you show your setting, give only a few details that will evoke a place. If the details are vivid, the reader will create a picture in their imagination.
When you write an article you ask " who, what, when, where, how and why?" when creating a story, ask "where, and when?" That is your setting!
If you are interested in a more detailed article about settings, just email me at meami_5@live.com
Monday, 7 March 2011
What would you like to see this week?
Hi guys. Just a quick post to ask what you would like a post on in the next few days, id really like to know what would be more useful to you?
A) Blogging tips.
B) Creative writing advice.
C) Other (please let me know eg. humour, life, finance, relationships etc.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Emma xx
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A) Blogging tips.
B) Creative writing advice.
C) Other (please let me know eg. humour, life, finance, relationships etc.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Emma xx
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Friday, 4 March 2011
10 Sneaky ways to get your man to do what you want!
This post is only for fun and should be taken with a pinch of salt.
1. Stand in front of the TV when he's playing his x box, and refuse to move until he agrees with you.
2. Tell him your ex wo7uld have done it. Their ego's can't resist this one.
3. Top tip : Most men will agree to anything just before or in the minutes after sex. ;)
4. Ask him at 4.00am, he'll probably tell you "yes" to get you to go back to sleep.
5. Tell him he can either take you dancing/pictures/beach/bowling/pub, or he can babysit while your slightly wild, single friend takes you.
6. If you want him to spend more time with you, sell his game station while he's out, and tell him you were burgled. Not only will you get his full attention, but you will have extra cash for the electric bill that needs paying!
7. Tell his mum. She'll be so concerned you might split up and he will have to move back home with her, she will have him agreeing to your demands in no time!
8. Tell your mum....the disapproving glances she gives him will have him treating you like a queen, while still thinking it was his idea!
9. Have your best mate come round and loudly announce the hot guy from your fav coffee shop, asked for your number. Him thinking he has competition will jump start the romantic gesture's before you can say " cappachino please."
10. If you have got this far and suggestions 1-9 haven't worked.....you probably need a new man, as this one has no pulse! ;)
1. Stand in front of the TV when he's playing his x box, and refuse to move until he agrees with you.
2. Tell him your ex wo7uld have done it. Their ego's can't resist this one.
3. Top tip : Most men will agree to anything just before or in the minutes after sex. ;)
4. Ask him at 4.00am, he'll probably tell you "yes" to get you to go back to sleep.
5. Tell him he can either take you dancing/pictures/beach/bowling/pub, or he can babysit while your slightly wild, single friend takes you.
6. If you want him to spend more time with you, sell his game station while he's out, and tell him you were burgled. Not only will you get his full attention, but you will have extra cash for the electric bill that needs paying!
7. Tell his mum. She'll be so concerned you might split up and he will have to move back home with her, she will have him agreeing to your demands in no time!
8. Tell your mum....the disapproving glances she gives him will have him treating you like a queen, while still thinking it was his idea!
9. Have your best mate come round and loudly announce the hot guy from your fav coffee shop, asked for your number. Him thinking he has competition will jump start the romantic gesture's before you can say " cappachino please."
10. If you have got this far and suggestions 1-9 haven't worked.....you probably need a new man, as this one has no pulse! ;)
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